Although this has nothing to do with the poem, in the summary you have something along the lines of 'R&R or at least R'. Are you saying we should just read it, or just review it? :) Good job for your first try!

~ CoolBeans18s

That was cute.

~Heart of the Sword

That's cute! *hasn't got any cookies left, that's why she couldn't give any out at her last review* And it fits my syllablism, but that doesn't really matter.

x Nicole x (too lazy to quote ;)