It was kinda confusing, I thought that it was about a guy telling what he did to his wife and I just got all confused. It was okay, I mean I don't like to read stuff about people killing other people unless its in a funny way. But it was a good poem, I just got confused a little.

Amazing. It tells this gruesome story in just a few words without being vague. I love it.

Man, that was kind of intense. Why did it switch to the woman's POV?

hey you go. this is very cool. reminds me of a mystery book i read. keep writing! and check out my stuff! id help.