Woman you rock! I lurve you! Write something! I wanna read some more Kali stuff!

Aww...! Good ending! Perfect!
_ Inu Lover

That was okay. It was a little confusing. You should try spacing dialogues out more.
_ Inu Lover

awesome! very dramatic lol..good job gnometipper! :)

awesome! very dramatic lol..good job gnometipper! :)

OMG i loved your story it was great. it had all the ingredients for a great story. I cant believe its over though. Thanks for writing it I enjoyed it very very very much.. as did all of my friends.. i told everyone about this story and they all love it. Keep writing more stories i love your work.

Amazing! its truly an amazing story... YOU END CHAPTERS WITH THE MOST SATANIC CLIFFHANGERS... e mail or im me to talk . bbl

Emily

AH! AH AH AH AH AH! nononononononononono! *dies* you take FOREVER TO POST and now leave me with a cliffhanger! gr no...this is NOT fair. lol _ you have no clue how long i've been waiting for this chapter! *growls* you had BETTER update soon. lol gr. nice chapter. Can't wait to see what Carl does. POST SOON!

bye *disappears*

oh...wow...u write vewwy vewwy god! ;)

more ppl should be reviewing your story! its great!

well, hope u update soon

pz out

~shell25

Wow... thats a great cliffhanger. Can't wait to read the rest. You hvae got me to read all the chapters in a few hours... i usually stop in the middle..but i just cant. Hurry up with the new chapters soon! I cant wait

NO! *dies* you. are. so. mean. ARG! seriously! you leave us haning w/ a thread of anticipation about to SNAP! I'm gonna die! hurry up and type! this is so good but you leave us w/ a short chapter and a note saying it may take a WHILE until you post next. *sniff* how will I live with out this story! _ okies a little dramatic but this is really suspenseful! hurry and write.

PEACE! _

P.S. *cries* are you done the next chapter yet? lol jk _

*disappears*

DUNDUN DUN! whats gonna happen? update soon please!

Robyn

NO NO NO NO NO NO NO! YOU CAN'T DO THIS TO ME! Where is the next chapter! ah! Carl must save Adrian! no! this is terrible! lol _ ok I am getting a bit carried away...but I'm really worried...POST SOON-very soon.

A complete scared person who needs the next chapter of this story.

AH! her bare hands...i don't think i can look...but I must since if I don't I'll go mad and have to be sent to the men in the white coats...oh wait I already am bwahahahhahahaha jk _ mep! this is scary lol

th3 1nk573r

NO! don't promise! she's evil she's evil! oh no...stupid CARL! gosh I was starting to like him...well I do but he's just being stupid. :o okies good job keep writing _

~The Inkster~