Reviews for Camera Cruelty
Tzotel431 chapter 1 . 6/29/2005
really to the point, you don't want the picture to be taken, but, now i am no one to tell you how to write your poetry, you could expand, where is the picture being taken at, who is taking it, why don't you want it taken, you know details.
reader chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
hahah!
chairmanmeow chapter 1 . 8/1/2003
Strange? Yes. I find it kind of funny too. Great job on the haiku.
joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
haha, very cute! i've felt the camera's cruelty many times &( your poem really "captures" the essence of a surprise picture ;) or, well, any kind of picture. nicely written!
crystal chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
Hehehe, descriptive. Can imagine u trying to get away from the camera!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
I have no idea why, but I just laughed!

Wonderful poem!

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Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
Heh. I know that feeling.

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Tiefling chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
Cool. Nice last line.
kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 5/28/2003
hehe.. nice one! good job, keep writing