Reviews for Ally Oceana |
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![]() ![]() ![]() OMG! This is so GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So COOL! I like the name Geli by the way, not sure why, I just do. I wish you would have continued this! Rock on! |
![]() ![]() I like how you used the name Geli, as one of your main characters, its truly unique and fits with the personality and the traits of the mother.D. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I liked this story a lot. By the way, thanks for reviewing my story Wolfbang. I'm redoing it to your standards ;-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great plot. But I don't see why its in supernatural...Keep writing, okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow, impressive! I love how you add twists and turns to your story. Your emotions also come out clearly, your dialogue flows well, and you definitely know how to handle a mother-daughter relationship in the story. A very interesting storyline, and one I don't think I've ever encountered involving human-animal transformations. Have you ever considered extending it? Elisabeth |