Well... I'm not going to give you a huge long review because I don't really feel like it at the moment... :P

Um.. I like how you are using characters from NL... Even if I didn't attend there in 8th grade... T_T

Uh... What is Lief? That is my question... I got kinda the sense that it was a kid... or a monkey. I couldn't really tell what though.

I like it... you really made everyone act like they really did from while I was there.

Detail again man! A lot of readers don't know what NL looks like... so make sure to have detail. kay?

Later and Love~Diablo Darkmoon

This is really funny! Keep writing!