Reviews for Shards of Betrayal
chocolatecreme06 chapter 1 . 6/30/2003
Nice imagery...truly touching like all of ur stuff
thornwitch chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
Again, another amazing new way to view things. Your work is very inspiring and thought-provoking and above all written in the best possible way.
ThistleBerry chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
One word came to mind...dang. The shatering of your body was very good, i could see that. I love this poem.
st. maverick chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
Wow, that was beautiful. The rhythm was very nice and I like that title-it suited the poem. Well done.
saiya-jinmira chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Dude is this for one of you characters?ordid some 'bleep' make you feel this way?with that aside ...Beautiful imagery and I could really see it...anyway... You should read adn review my two poems The rose and I am...hehehehe
Ilsa Immerman chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
Lovely in a dark morbid kind of way. Very nice imagery.