ooh im glad she has some1 who believes her. jake is great. great job on the 2 chapters, i cant wait 2 read more, this story is really good!

this is such a cool story! i loved how u described the body, it seemed so real!

Oh, I'm sorry. I didnt know that was your real name, I too have a strange name which I absoulty hate. Anyhow, this story does seem to be getting interesting, but to let you know, it is spelled "mannequin" btw, lol. Yeah and I bet that Mitch cat has something to do with it all cuz its a black cat so it is like bad luck or something, lol! good work, keep it going.

Weird names huh? Well my real name is Kayla and my real sister's name is Karly. But ur lucky I am taking that as a compliment. Peace and read on, this story gets real interesting.

That is a interesting story and a first chapter. However, the girls have weird names, Kayla and Karly? Odd names which I have not heard before, but oh well a good story none the less. Cant wait for the next chapter!

ooh i like it! please write more!