Reviews for The Darkening
Seremela Minyatur chapter 6 . 7/10/2003
ooh im glad she has some1 who believes her. jake is great. great job on the 2 chapters, i cant wait 2 read more, this story is really good!
Seremela Minyatur chapter 2 . 6/12/2003
this is such a cool story! i loved how u described the body, it seemed so real!
Swirl34 chapter 4 . 5/30/2003
Oh, I'm sorry. I didnt know that was your real name, I too have a strange name which I absoulty hate. Anyhow, this story does seem to be getting interesting, but to let you know, it is spelled "mannequin" btw, lol. Yeah and I bet that Mitch cat has something to do with it all cuz its a black cat so it is like bad luck or something, lol! good work, keep it going.
angrygrl chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Weird names huh? Well my real name is Kayla and my real sister's name is Karly. But ur lucky I am taking that as a compliment. Peace and read on, this story gets real interesting.
Swirl34 chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
That is a interesting story and a first chapter. However, the girls have weird names, Kayla and Karly? Odd names which I have not heard before, but oh well a good story none the less. Cant wait for the next chapter!
Seremela Minyatur chapter 1 . 5/29/2003
ooh i like it! please write more!