Word rearrangement is needed in some places, but it's a bittersweet poem. Don't ever think such things are stupid- the people you meet online, while 'faceless', can be just as important as the ones you know in-real-life.

like the sentiment, but it could do with a coupla of rearranged words and same para. breaks. other then that, it's all good.

on a more personal note, i wish my ex has written me something like that.. too bad you're not it.

oh the poem is lovely.i m sorry for u..but i think u should change a few words cause they dont fit..but i love the poem a lot..hope u read and review my stuff.i want to know what u think:) say whatever u think about it.