Reviews for My Day Was Going Bad
iustus chapter 1 . 6/12/2004
Great freeverse, nothing bad to say about it. :)
Gauy chapter 1 . 4/20/2004
Well, what can I say. This is a pretty good poem. It reminds me of when I told my girlfriend how I felt. It rose my spirits a lot since I was spiralling downwards due to these pent up feelings. Sorry for going on about my life.
Anyway, good poem. (sorry, I'm not really good at reviews)
phthalo blue chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
I can certainly relate to this poem. It's very good and well written.
The Wanlorn chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Ah, this was sweet. I especially like the cardboard game part.

~~NIre the EVil~~
kamikaze899 chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
nice metaphors and imagery!
Seishinseii chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
AH! KAWAII! Kawaii,Kawaii,Kawaii,Kawaii,Kawaii,Kawaii, OK, i know that gets annoying after a while, so I wont... But it was very kawaii! Unfortunately i dont have time to read your other stuff, Internet is gunna disconnect, so until then!

)Love Ya, Shannon
bubblemilktea chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
I love this one too!

It's so true, love can make your day so much better.

You described it so well.

I congradulate you!
Follow the Stray chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
Aw, so sweet, I feel I can relate _ lol
Ixyavi chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
Wow... ;.; that brought tears to my eyes... It was so sweet!
CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Ahh, another sweet one. I don't know why, but this one nearly made me cry, it just reminds me of my life! :)

Keep writing sweetly!

Vnomi. ;)
FrostFireChild chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
wow, this one's sweet. the title doesnt fit too well, no indication whatsoever that it might be a love poem.
ChaoticDestiny48 chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
i like it
nutnlp1 chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
COOL COOL COOL...I CAN TELL THIS IS KIND OF RELEATED TO THE OTHERS...
Seiten chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Nice poem. A poem doesn't have to be long, just truthful.
cosmo-queen chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
Sweet poem. I wish I had someone like this that I could count on to make my day better :) A more inspirational, positive piece. Keep writing :)

*cosmo-queen*
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