Reviews for One Last Dance
LucifersDarkChild chapter 1 . 11/28/2003
how...meaningful...umm...do... do you think its possible for me to put music to these lyrics? cos...well, i REALLY like them...and, well...the keyboard is very much accessible here...umm, please?
Ten no Kage chapter 1 . 7/28/2003
Wow again...Song lyrics are hard to write, but this is so good! I could read it to a beat and it would sound even better. I almost can hear music playing.
Suicidal Butterfly chapter 1 . 6/23/2003
Beautiful song. I think it is very lovely. I Enjoyed the message.
ShadowEver chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
Hey, this is really good. I like how you chose your words, and how the flow goes. Nice, and thanks for reviewing!

~*~Shadow4ever~*~
CrimsonSoulTears chapter 1 . 5/31/2003
I love this song. It's really good. Just missed going on my favourites (OOf). But yes, loved all the stuff and things.
firess chapter 1 . 5/30/2003
that is very good. but does "the knife has missed its mark" mean something about cutting? it implies that.