Hmm... It's been forever since an update, so I'm having no clue where this would go.

Aww... I feel all warm and squishy inside. And also sorry for Ash.

Hmm... This could get interesting. Nice car, btw.

Yum! An interesting little encounter with the dressing room. On to 13! *dashes off like a superhero*

"'Aw,' Jaysen pouted. 'Can't we take one together?'"
That was such a shoutout to me and you know it... ::smirks::
"'Way things are now,' Jaysen said in a matter of fact tone. 'You would be on top, I can't say I would be opposed.'"
So was that you little... ::clears throat:: Anyway... Good chapter! And hey, don't make fun of twenty-minute showers! That's how long I take! xD Can't wait for more, cowboy, bring it on!

Youch... I knew it was her father the second he appeared, but still, youch... Poor Ashleigh! I'm almost caught up; one more chapter...

::Bursts out laughing:: Wow, wow, wow... Please don't tell me this chapter was based on experience, cowboy... Lemme guess about that first store... Was it Abercrombie? Gie. ::shivers:: You included a DC shirt! ::huggles:: I have one or two of those myself... And let me promise you- we will -never- go lingerie shopping together. o0;

Wow... Poor people. I liked how they both reacted the same but didn't know it.

Hey, easy on Fairport, buddy! Liked that Dry Cell reference, though. Ashleigh's a nice gal, I must say... I'd feel so weird doing what she just apparently did...

Aww, sounds like a great day they had. Then again, any day at Darien Lake is awesome. _ ::reads next few chapters::

Hee, loved the beginning... That's actually how I respond to telemarketers, also. o0;;

Those two are so cute it just makes me want to pinch their cheeks, they wuv each other. Heehee.

Word.

YAY! hehe. very fun. It's fun talkin' ghetto, dawg. But I suck at it, lol, I happy now. wohooies.

I really liked Jaysen's advice to Ryann... It was very good. Nice chapter!

Great chapter. I liked the journal entry, as that's basically what I write down in mine. Nice and realistic. I also liked how you went through every single detail of Jaysen's school day.