|Reviews for Without|
| TheatrePhunk chapter 1 . 11/21/2003
Very nice... 'm liking it, so far. Ryann is based on Randi, huh? Just taking a guess from your other fic...
| Teresz chapter 14 . 10/11/2003
aww. I would go on and on about how sweet of a friend Jaysen is, but I'm sure you've heard that from me and others over a million times! I can't wait for the next chapter!
| Ryanna Surakame chapter 13 . 10/1/2003
Ack... a cliffie! ''
I love how the characters have developed through the story. You do a good job at it! And all the chars are so interesting! It's good to be able to read a story and relate to the people in it. -
Looking forward to chappie 14!
| Ryanna Surakame chapter 12 . 9/30/2003
*shivers* Oh that was soo good! Very very interesting situation... Making Jay shop for 'unmentionables' with her and then Erin turning up... This was my fave chap so far! Keep up the awesome work!
And yeah, I know about the school thing... Going through it myself, actually. Don't kill yuorself trying to update, but I'm definately glad when you do. -
| Ryanna Surakame chapter 11 . 9/30/2003
What a surprise! I checked your story, and there were three new chappies! _
It really sucks when you're mad at a best friend, but it looks like an apology is coming up here soon. I hope, anyway...
Oh, and you mentioned Dry Cell in one of your chapters a while back, so I checked 'em out. They're awesome! - Thankies for that; always looking for more good bands to listen to. :)
| Teresz chapter 13 . 9/26/2003
"I guess some would call us the 'ultimate losers' eh?" OH...Definietly...*rolls her eyes* I know exactly what you meant by...uh...venting. Nice chapter...not totally eventful, but who says the chapters have to be eventful. It was fun to read, eventful or not. great job, as always. luv ya, Teresz
| Cryptic Insanity chapter 13 . 9/26/2003
WHAT'S BEHIND THE CORNER?
He. UPDATE XD
| Teresz chapter 12 . 9/21/2003
I feel so bad, not revieiwing for like EVER! ah...why does school have to be so time consuming? Well, I'll try to make this a long review to make up for my slowness. Dude, did this really happen? That is so weird...Erin showing up...odd. FUnny chapter. I loved it. It was fun to read. I'm glad you two made up...that's awesome. "In their opinion, the real fans had both CD's, not just the second one." Alleluia to that! uhm...that must have been a very...interesting experience going to Victoria's Secret with a friend. Okay, i';m not a guy, but...okay, i would feel odd doing that with a GIRL friend, when I am a girl..I can only begin to imagine how awkward that was. *shakes head* what torture you must go through for your friends...mm. lol. Hey, i miss talking to you on AIM. I can't get on a lot...evil school. erg. Well, I can't wait to read more.. Feel the power of the circle and the...shoot! I can't remember the club name...erg...HRTTM! THAt's right! haha. It took me a few seconds, but I got it! WUv ya! -Teresz
| I am Gone chapter 12 . 9/16/2003
Your writting isn't that 's reall quite good auctly.
| Cryptic Insanity chapter 12 . 9/13/2003
You get two free periods weekly? Arg, you lucky bugger.
At any rate, this was a cute chapter. He.
| R.A. Sears chapter 11 . 9/6/2003
YAY! Another one I'm caught up with. Partay in the hizzouse fo shizzle, yo.
| Teresz chapter 11 . 9/5/2003
aww. poor jaysen. "Ryann" is too wisdomish for her own good!
| Teresz chapter 10 . 9/5/2003
aww. yeah yeah yeah, I know...it's about time I reviewed! haha. I've been pretty busy. I'm sorryful! But, that's a shame, I'm sure the two make up. They were too good of friends to break up over that. Hey, when kait and I were in the argument, I took all the pictures of her and I down too. Wow! I'm not the only one that does that. And, my first concert with a friend was when I was 13 also. it was a good Charlotte concert too...weird! Oh, yes, speaking of coincidences, Megan and i met. She came over my hosue for a little bit, and we just talked in stuff. We got along really well, tho. hopefully i'll see her sometime this weekend or whatever. hehe...I read Chapter 11 now!
| Cryptic Insanity chapter 11 . 9/5/2003
WO! You must bow down to me for I have figured out why I did not review chapter ten: I didn't read it. I never got the little email thingy for it. Then, when you mentioned it I mixed it up with nine. So, I shall review ten and eleven now. Heehee
Ten: Woah, she lied. I knew it! She wanted to keep him on her side of the line! Haha, I own a side like that...
Eleven: Woah, talk about Drama. Now make them make up and make it all happy!
| silentteardrops chapter 9 . 9/4/2003
Hurry and update. I'm begging you. Hehehe, just kidding. Only if you want to. But I like it and I keep reading it over, so. Make tons of people happy and write more.