Wow! I really like this. I mean I really really really like this! I always wanted to publish a story like this on here (It's called Sitting in a pool of time) and your story really makes me feel like my story is so silly and stupid. I'm in awe! It's really very good.

Short chapters are nice Then you don't have to scroll down so much!

All anime names...i've never seen Cecelia though...

Certainly an interesting tale that keeps us guessing as to the relationships between the various people who want the amulet: the Black Knight and his servant, the guard who catches Leila's attention and the mysterious female inside Leila's head. Not forgetting Zachary of course... it's not quite clear yet how much he knows about things. I'm not quite sure how convincing is the superimposition of modern paraphernalia such as mobile phones on the "swords and sorcery" part. Somehow I feel there needs to be a way the relevant characters can slip from one world to the other without being too conspicuous.

Getting more interesting...(I had to read out of the notepad! stupid comp can't read fiction press stories anymore...weird eh?)

I know this is off topic, but...Rurouni Kenshin and Yu Yu Hakasho ROCK!

very interesting story, You must write more okie?

One favor to ask...Can you r/r my story? The one called "The Four of The Great" If you can, Thanks!

Yay! Paragraphs! *happy smile* Cool castle, like the stair idea. Was a bit confusing with the transition between when Leila was talking to the Unicorn Queen and from when she was waiting for the bird. Other than that, it was good! I noticed the "~" afterward, and then I realised it was a transition.

You have to tell me when you update, ok? *glares* or else

good cliffhanger

What a twist! Wicked...I like the ending of this chapter, how she thought she would fall in love with him, but he seemed like the guy who wanted the Amulet. Wicked!

One tiny thing though: I would suggest changing the formatting, and breaking it up into paragraphs. It's difficult to read when it's one big 'blob'

No! I'm not flaming! Awesome story...going to continue reading...

This story is pretty good. You should continue with the story! I wanna noe what happens with her encounter with the guard. Also you might wanna seperate the story into paragraphs. . MEOW!