It's neat. The trail of blood thing is kind of goth and angsty, so you might want to change it to something better. Otherwise, I like this.

*sighs* Beautiful. When I was in Prague last spring there was a woman - I wouldn't say homeless but definitely not well off - singing the most beautiful music in the world, so well, on the St. Charles' Bridge. No orchestra; no formal audience; just her and her music and the statues and the water. And it was the most beautiful thing in the world. This reminds me of that woman...is it inspired from a real life experience? It feels like it is to me...

good poem! very well written! keep it up!

Much feeling in this poem. I really like it. Great job.

hi _ i liked your poem. it's disturbing. but i wish you had elaborated a bit more, because it seemed incomplete.

ja ne!

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