Reviews for Call an Ambulance
Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
nicely done. i like the line: "My heart is on fire" )
hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
Very emotional piece!

"Take me to the hospital

and freeze this heart"

There are some great lines in there! Loved it!

cio, hoellenwauwau
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
beautifully said! i love it! so true, i love love love it! its so real, exactly how i feel! *n that rhymes, not intentionally...* cool! nice nice nice! i like! great job!
Grendel chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
Great work. I think they could make some good lyrics for a music...
thepeacekeeper chapter 1 . 6/1/2003
Very powerful. I sense the pain of the poem. Tragic, chaotic, painful...ah, I feel it all now.