Reviews for A Walk Down Memory Lane |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "It's a long, long road Down the black-and-white memory lane" I like that line d:) Great job on the whole thing! d:D |
![]() ![]() ![]() this poem is beautiful i like it because it is not so professionalized it is raw and filled with emmotions that otherwise sometimes cannot escape it in it's self reveals things abaout you even though i don't know you personally i can have regrets and hopes and dreams and pain but that you run your life not you feelings which shows a sence of empowerment i like this peice it is well expressed and nicely written i love jason mraz to...i read ur bio he's so cute i read aahorsen not that long ago too that whole triolagy is great i dunno if you have read shades childrenn it's by garth nix to i thought it was amazing if you havent you should |
![]() ![]() ![]() Nostalgia is one of my favorite elements in things, and you've put it into an interesting perspective (whether you intended to or not). A lovely read and very thought provoking for me. Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A life with no regrets is something few can truly claim, yet this is what you speak of, or is it just a silly dream? Hope to see more works. |
![]() ![]() i'd have to say that so far this is my favorite. short but sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great poem, I loved the part about getting over your past and looking to th future instead. |
![]() ![]() That was beautiful and well-written. Very sweet :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved it! It wrapped up very nicely! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like your title! It really summaries the main point of the poem. I like this line too! 'It's a long, long road down the black-and-white memory lane'. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() ~ I love this. Your words are deeply moving and true. This wil definitely go into my favorites. Keep creating more. c. butterfly~** |