|Reviews for Choosing a Path|
| bahaghari chapter 1 . 3/8/2006
This poem made me think. And well-written.
| the Stranger in the moonlight chapter 1 . 2/15/2006
Should is your answer. We have free will and so how could there truly be, destiny. but at the same time I do believe in destiny, but and in fate. I simply believe we are destined to meet people but we are fated to grow as people. This may make no sense but this was a poem with a good question to be answered.
the Stranger in the moonlight.
| FictionPressPenName chapter 1 . 10/29/2005
Your writing style really has changed a lot when you compare this to your newer poems. I still think your older ones are really good though. This one has a great idea.
| Unfairy chapter 1 . 11/22/2004
We all pay prices for our actions apparently, I am paying for my own, I don't know about the paths of life, but I think it would be soo much better and if we could see further down them... Good stuff
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/15/2004
ooh, that was... confusing (maybe that's just because my mind is kind of slow at the moment) but i think insightful. i think about these things a lot.
how is it that life goes on
not waiting or hesitating [instead of hesitate]
i like that part :)
keep it up!
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/28/2004
nice job. i sometimes have a hard time making choices, and deciding which path to follow... )
| ay chapter 1 . 4/6/2004
yes choosing a path is hard
have a nice day
| Fallen Fire chapter 1 . 1/14/2004
Again, I appreciate the formatting of the poem and this time the use (or lack of) capitalization work like your previous staggered rhyme scheme.
Good cutoff length too. Short and sweet.
| Drizzen chapter 1 . 10/30/2003
pretty good *pants* man i gotta rview th all o u wont kill me U
| UndiscoveredOtherkin chapter 1 . 10/25/2003
Or we could just be a bunch of ants thinking we have sentience but in the end...don't. I like this one.
| Veromorphia chapter 1 . 10/15/2003
Wow. Your views on faith and destiny are chilling, and captivating, especailly when they are being expressed in such elegant yet terrifying words. You are an amazing writer.
| Viksy81 chapter 1 . 10/2/2003
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| Delphian Wyrd chapter 1 . 9/27/2003
woah, That really makes me think...
| Starlight Rain chapter 1 . 9/23/2003
Nice . I especially like the last three lines. I often wonder which dream is more romantic, in the spiritual sense: the one which says we pick our own paths, or the one which says all was meant to be.