Reviews for The Humble Egotist
Amused Bookworm chapter 1 . 6/20/2003
Wonderous poem I enjoy it. You are true in your statements and thoughts.

May you stumble but never fall,

A.B.
thornwitch chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
You're very right, nobody ever thinks that there can be a Humble Egotist, but you've made me think twice and your wonderful imagery brought it to life.
Au Printemps chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
Haha, I love this poem! It's genius!

Some magic:

'The green leafs of success/Drift down upon the body,/Classifying the soul/As that of an/Egotist.'

'It is conceived/In our minds/That humbleness/Must not tango,...'

Especially that last quote. Humbleness tangoing with the ego, now there's a delicious thought.
saiya-jinmira chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
very interesting..gets me thinking...rnrnrnrnrnrn keep writing...
ThistleBerry chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
This is a great poem, it really makes one think..."the fountain of your eyes/drenching the innocent crowd"...i really like that line, the imagery is powerful.