i want more! this story has me fascinated. please udpdate when you have the chance.

this story is an amazing i just wish i had pictures so i could see what the dragons looked like

i reviewed your other chapters as Arokh but i changed my pen name sos here i am i liked this chapter but if i was nivok i would have stayed in the shadows and listened i wouldnt have said anything!

Another nice look at the past, though not a very appopriate time as it turned out for Sherath.

wow i just love your stuff its so cool

i especially like Darst and Anarth you could get this published your very talented

keep writing

Arokh

Cool, taking it out from inside!

A long sea journey, that'll be interesting to see!

Hmm...Anarth & Darst are really getting closer, considering her "YOU HEAR ME? HE'S MINE!" at the end.

Just had to mention that, heh.

Oh, I took a look at the artwork too, nice pics.

Wow this story is a talented writer...I hope u win the bet _

i love this story it makes ma laugh grin and cry i really love it keep writing!

Nice!

Hm...seems like they're headed for pretty important things

thats funny is it over? if it is that stinks i really liked this story awesome chapter!

thats great i really like Darst and Anarth together! theyer cool

keep writing!

Nice battle, and it seems everyone's together agian.

Hm...this the end, or is there more?

Nice scene at the end, and very touching!

omg i loved that is was touching i really liked it continue please