Reviews for no we never kissed
flying blind chapter 1 . 11/9/2003
this is great, the way you have put your words across is amazing. well done
Robin the Jarbog chapter 1 . 10/9/2003
This is beautiful. The way you use your words is brilliant and thought provoking. I love it!
Red dragon rider chapter 1 . 6/10/2003
That's a really good poem, the way you use the words is beautiful.
wingless chapter 1 . 6/3/2003
i like this one a whole lot. its so much the way memories are. its a mix between emotions and objects and times in the past. i like these memories. i like how they are all jumbled up.

i actually didn't notice that each paragraph started with a number until the last line. its really genius how you tied it all together at the end. this is really an amazing piece of work. i am still not exactly sure what you mean by the dead. is it the relationship or a person maybe...

well anyways this is a good one
sathepine chapter 1 . 6/2/2003
Your poem is grammatically incorrect and i couldn't seem to fully understand some phrases. But you know, it's beautiful.