Are you serious this story is based on your life? It's so cute! But complicated. My favorite character has to be Jake, he sounds so sweet. I was kinda sad that Jessie got replaced, nut it was understandable. He took to long to tell you, that he liked you. You know for some reason throughout the story I thought you were going to end up with Billy, but then I thought, 'Wait, that doesnt sound like right.' Here's a personal question out of curiosity, are you still with Jake? And are you still friends or whatever with Jessie? Those questions just makes me wonder.

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Aw so sweet

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heii loving it

if its not done update soon plz

Fabulous story!

I really liked the fact that it was different from similar stories were the best friend likes her but she likes someone else and in the end she chooses him instead of the friend. Jake seemed like a nice guy and I rooted for him from the beginning!

AWSOME!

haha. more drama.

i love jake ;]

sounds really interesting.

omg that is so sad!

I'm only on chapter 1, but I'm very interested! Ok, just wanted to let you know that someone's reading this story, don't take it down.

Ok, that was all, I'll continue reading the story, now.

Thanks for sharing.

wowee- talk about a steamy twisted ending

after reading that first chapter i kind of hoped Laura would get the guy, or maybe nicole would fall for jesse's bestfriend or sumthing

oh i absolutely love this story. it's really good, cya later.

scream!yay! *starts dancing maniacly, clapping her hands*

this story is awesome! i just read through it today and i think you should have a sequel. anyways, i really liked it. great job! enjoy writing your other stories.