Reviews for Strike Out
Mr. Death Bunny chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
O.O oh...kay...odd...
Lise HEARTS Alan chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
Gurl...wo! So funny and so real! I see that person Deth come giving u good reviews but wanna diss my shit, obviously need to broaden his horizons, anyway, that shit was tight almost like a rap. u need to take it to a poetry slam and talk about them niggas.
Spanish Amor chapter 1 . 6/17/2003
kep chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
i like that, its' good. it addresses an issue with enough humour to carry it off well without forgetting the underlying message. very good.
Ashes of a Willow chapter 1 . 6/14/2003
You tell 'em! It's good that you are taking control! I loved the rhyming in this poem!
Michini712 chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
Oh yes! A vulgar poem! I loved your brutal honesty!
Junior Mint chapter 1 . 6/13/2003
[little son of a bitch thinks hes so great...] good one, good decision too. ;) don't let the SUV driving assholes get ya down!
Cindy Moon chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
I like!
suicidel angel chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
i liked the way it was written, with a hint of humour added to it, so it didn't just come out as a whining about how all guys are asses, well written.
Frostee05 chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
That shit is HOT. I liked it alot.