Reviews for Duty and Defiance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() peachy just peachy! I hope everything works out all right! I cant wait to see what happens next! Update soon! Liriel |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting chapter. It was very complex. _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() ~dramatic gasp~ Desmond was engaged at one time? The plot thickens, as it tends to do. Hmm... now this former fiancee could be Madeleine. Or maybe she loved him at one point, when he was unavailable. Argh, I don't know! But it's all very intriguing. And plus, I see that Isabella is having second thoughts about this engagement business... I blame Caleb. Heehee. But she's only thinking of him, I suppose. Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o oo oo Desmond sure has messed up. Sure has! But it wasnt really his fault but still. Stupid idiots, all the men are! Humph. Update soon. Liriel |
![]() ![]() well I wonder wut's going on in miss delacroix's mind. I believe she likes desmond. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm...interesting chapter! I wonder who Desmond's ex-fiance was... |
![]() ![]() ![]() More intrigue! I love it. I am slightly confused about Caleb's age though. Didn't Isabella say at one point he was 20... and then, later on he says to himself that Desmond "at two and twenty" was younger than he was now? Clarifying that would be the only way I can think to improve this chapter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very interesting. Was Madeleine his former fiance then? Hm... Anyway, update soon! Bye! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hmm... I wonder what he would've said... Update soon! Bye! _ |
![]() ![]() I wonder wut he would've said! it's going to bother me now. |
![]() ![]() ![]() still good... this is not something i would normally read, but there's something about the plot that makes me read this thing... and it is REALLY good. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ugh, her mother is one huge bitch. I'm so glad she's not my mother. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hi! I really love your story and can't wait for the next update. Keep up the great work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AH I am pulling my hair out! I must find out whats happens next! Update SOON! Liriel |
![]() ![]() ![]() ~Gasp!~ Perfect timing, Mr. and Mrs. Hastings! Oh, now I'll have to be put on suspense for a little longer. Again, I completely felt for Caleb... I was so sad when he talked about his mother leaving him. But on the bright side, Isabella totally *loves* him! I absolutely love their little history. I don't know if he'll propose, though. If he breaks her heart... ~shakes fist~ Wonderful chapter, as always. |