Reviews for Duty and Defiance |
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![]() ![]() ![]() What would have happened if Isabella's parents hadn't come home right then? (I love her Dad by the way... very reminicent of Mr. Bennett... although perhaps without as sharp a wit.) This was a very interesting chapter, full of emotion. I hope they don't have to conform to what society expects of them. These two need each other! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'd a feeling it would come to this. Poor Isabella. Post more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o and the plot thickens! Im glad to finally find out something about Caleb's parents. . . but its soo sad! Poor Caleb. Update soon! Liriel |
![]() ![]() I kinda figured he would go to her house, which makes me want the next chapter more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow. I was hoping his father was a prince or something... lol. |
![]() ![]() I love how you are able to write things so that I can see them. The beginning of this chapter, your description was so vivid I could *see* Caleb there in the window and see what he was seeing. So, all the hinting is over. I had a feeling Caleb wasn't exactly a legitimate child, and that's why he was so looked down upon. How sweet for him to go to Isabella for comfort. I hope she's home and not off galavanting with Desmond! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh... excellent use of pathos. Poor Caleb. Now I'm a bit mad at Colonel Weatherly! I do hope, however, that these developments will encourage Caleb to read the diary. Until then, yes, seek comfort with Isabella... Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, how awfully sad... now we know about Caleb's father and poor Caleb didn't even get the chance even to know anything about him... well, update soon as always! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Caleb! Post more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() vewy good! i like it... i like very much... keep writing! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw. Poor Caleb. This is still great! Update soon! Bye! _ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Poor Caleb. I actually agree with Adam, he would have been better off without knowing. What's going to happen at Isabella's? Update SOON! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love it! Especially the sparring between Desmond and Isabella. But Caleb is sweet too! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hm. I'm guessing the messenger is more important than the group thinks... Anyhow, update soon! Bye! |
![]() ![]() ![]() very nice... some little things i'm too lazy to correct for you in this review... I'm worried about Audrey... every time she shows up I hear sinister music! it worries me... she is EVIL i tell you... EVIL! I like the story... keep writing! :-) |