Poor Caleb! I'm beginning to love Caleb more and more. He's my kind of dream husband. Even tempered.. and gentle. )

And believe it or not, I like Adam too. He brings color and life into the story. Although he's very blunt, I think he'd be very fun to talk to. Not to live with though.

I hope this is a happy ending. I can't stand sad endings... I'd drown out crying. I'm very emotional.

I wanna know what happened to Caleb's mother! And Father for that matter! Oh, I hope everything goes ok for Bella and Caleb...true love preveils right! Great chapter! XOXO Merri

Aw, Caleb and Isabella can't be together...

Poor Caleb! He deserves to be happy!

I love the details in this chapter... the messy room, the damaged journal... And of course all the sweet stuff at the beginning.

Another great chapter!

Great chapter! I can't wait to see what happens next!

hey... this is a great story...

I love historical/romance stories...

I know, i know... i'm a hopeless romantic!

anyway, just wanted to tell i thought this story is off to a fantastic strat and i can't wait for more...

keep up the good work !

update soon!

This is to good not to update. You must keep writing this it's a pure waste of talent if you don't.

Aww..., ok, I'm not sure which pairing I want yet...but so far, this has been really good. Update SOON!

this is so enthralling! I love Caleb. when i first started the story, i thought Adam was going to be the person Bella fell in love with, and I was like, NO! Caleb is better. so im very happy that they're together. by the way, what is wrong with Caleb's parents? did i miss that, or is it an important "to be revealed later" kind of thing? nice job!

OOh! I like it! Character development, romance, mystery! What more could one want!

~Silvestria~

Oh my... this isn't good. I hate it when characters fall in love and everyone else hates them for it, it's just not fair. Grr... oh who gives a damn! If they love each other than they should be together, and that is that.

Very intersting! I like the character of Caleb :) I hope you write more soon!

It is truly not fair. Why can't they be together? Caleb is such a dear. Who cares if he doesn't fit into their society! He is much more careful than Isabella is~ and I think she's more defiant.

Wow. This is really turning out as terrific as the first story. You are my very favorite author! )

Nice chapter! Now I know a bit more about the characters.

Good last sentence to leave us hanging with. "No... But you ought to be."

I really like how you're revealing the backstory piece by piece here. At first, I just thought Caleb was kind of an eccentric, arty student. But, now, I realize he's not that at all. He's just been living on the outskirts of society his whole life because of the accident of his birth.

I certainly hope this ends happily.