Mer(this is a sound I make, don't ask)...you make me happy! It's unfortunately way too often that the relationship between the two "potentials" developes into a romantic one either 1. Way too quickly (time wise) or 2. More of a rush with less character development. Right now you are making a real steady progress, on top of having a narrating character who has obvious faults ( "...self-centered prick"). I very much like, and I very much await more. I Will Be Reading.

-'- Rallen -'-

Omigod! This story is so cute! I love it! The characters are great, very funny, especially Kier. He's the greatest. _ Anyway, please please pretty please put up the next chapter soon!

YES! Avril Haters Unite! *bounces* I think I may be in love. *steals Travis* _

Another great chapter.. I can just see the future of Kier and Travis. Please make them get together! ;; lol gotta love The Box.. XD Write more!

And just for you, I promise to update Don't Look Now within the next week. Thankkie!

*Slim*

You're going to have your head smashed in like Baby Jenks's parents... I swear it...

Trav sounds like my ideal boyfriend. ::grins:: Too bad he's not real -either-. Dammit.

Oh well... let me bloat your ego so that you will write more.

This was very cute. I like Travis, he's sweet.

I've never been to a camp, other than the compulsory school ones, but they sound fun. *grins*

Write more? Please?

*screams* How -dare- you stop? Just when he finds out Kier's gay. *grumbles* Write more soon, kay? This is really good.

*Slim*

You theif! That's -MY- swear phrase you used in chapter one! Make up your own! ...Well, you changed the end up, but it's still mine!

...I've got a few questions for you later, but for now, I'll leave it to this: Where in that head of yours do you get this stuff? No matter how much I poke it, nothing this good ever comes out.

You've got a touch of a detailing problem, but that can be dealt with. I like how you did the characters. Unlike myself, you can make them up off the top of your head, and I commend you for it. Eh... well, so much for constructive criticism. I'm good at bitching, not much else.

Keep writing. I love it! _... ew. gross genki faces with this font...

This is really good-love the almighty box. The characters are fun and interesting and I hope to see more soon!

Another good chapter! I really like this story it's really good.

This is a good story so far! I like it. On to the next chapter!

Hey, add more :)

Good start, typical jock asses. Like Travis' hair. Kier nice name. Yeah, tired really badly written review.