Reviews for Welcome to Camp Hell |
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![]() ![]() ![]() (don't ask about the muse comment. i'm getting myself confused) i liked the ending. it was different but .. I don't know. I mean a sequel's predictable and I guess the second one with the school would be best, obviously :) or maybe not a school..something about living near each other anyhow. it's well written and I enjoyed it immensely. well done :) (r&r back?) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting start. I like it. It seems different to your other fics, not that that's a bad thing - ust something I noticed. Personally, I prefer muse but I'll be damned if that'll stop me reading it :P |
![]() ![]() ![]() Set! ;_; It's over! *wails* So beautiful/sad/sweet/undescrible. I'm so glad I was able to see this story out to the end. The developing characters, and the writing even better when I thought it wasn't possible, all made this story such a worthwhile piece. Even though there was a break because of writer's block, I want to thank you for finishing this. You've left me with some memorable characters, and you've helped set the standards for fics I like on FP (this was one of the first stories I read on FP _~). You also had a believable plot and relationship, and they aren't like every other story. So, in all- . . (Wow, my first serious review. o_O;; Feel honoured! :P) And please... *on floor* SEQUEL! PLEASE ALMIGHTY AUTHOR! New town idea. That leads to bedrooms. Bedrooms lead to making out. And making out leads to happy fangirls! ...Erm... XD Or I can just leave with I WANT MORE OF THESE PRETTY BOYS AND YOUR GREAT WRITING! |
![]() ![]() ![]() aw the ending was so sweet. im glad they resolved their issues. if you are going to make a sequel to this, i think the best idea would be if travis moved to keir's town. but i'd like to see a whole lot of strife before they can both be happy with one another and accept who they are. thank you for writing this story! i hope you update soon especially engel... |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like that second idea, Kier and Travis going to the same school or something! XD I look forward to the sequel! |
![]() ![]() OHH you have to write the sequal with them in the same school! I would read that all the way to the end and squeal every time it was updated just like I do with this one! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Imagine how happy I was to check 'Favorite Stories' and see three new chapters for this. Or was it four?.. I dunno. But it was a bunch, and it made my day. No sequel ideas here, but I have a hard enough time coming up with ideas for my own stories, let alone someone else's. Rawr. Anyway.. we got a kiss at the end! Yahoo! *scampers off to celebrate* ~Zip |
![]() ![]() O Ya, You have to write a sequel. And the idea of him moving to Kier town would just be so cool. Go with that idea and write a sequel damn you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() You know what? You should really REALLY do a sequel! and you should do it about them finding out they live near eachother, and then some smut (obviously) but you could add some conflicting characters (like sam) who will beat them up, and some angst problems like *I am so not good enough for you* and viola! |
![]() ![]() i like your second option for a sequel cuz i like travis and keir to much for them to be thrown away... just thought i'd put in my two cents |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw It was a really sweet end! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D Travis and Kier are so cute! I think that we really NEED a sequel! M... it probably be good what you say about them in the same school or at least at the same town... but being a surprise for at least Travis. It must be interesting to discover how Travis will act... Keep writing, please! :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like the second option for the sequel, sounds interesting, and fun, and that way we get fun kier/trav scenes. Which I'm into... Hehe. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great chapter! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! Like your story. so... when're they gonna get together? finally? and I don't get it. Is Kier mad at Travis again for hugging him on the bus? If I were him I'd soo be like, YEAH! SCORE! but you know, that's just me. . Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() *Squeals* Too cute! As usual Set, you've managed to make a fangirls day happy. o Loved it as always. *tears* I'm going to miss them when it's over. |