_ i like it so far, it's very very cute.

i know how the school work thing goes...

yea! just keep it up, and i'll c ya whenever you have time to post

~Galene

::beats her in the head with various hard items, including an anvil on a stick::

That's all right...I'll wait forever for the next chapter! Such a great story. Uhm, yeah. School and grades should always come first; at least, that's what my teachers tell me -.-;; Can't wait till you get the time to get it up! -

ahh school... the bane of fan fiction and original fiction online. Seems to be a problem when so much is written by teenagers. Speaking of grades slipping... I've got to go.

Sleep that is. You didn't think I'd actually do homework, did you?

Morissa (two weeks behind and loving it) (sort of)

Oh no! You can't just stop there! *Sob*

Well, take your time. :) Hope you get everything worked out (so we can all read the next chapter!)

Ah! I was going to comment when I got to the end of this story (So far), but I loved this chapter. hehe. We play Egyptian, my friends and I, but we call it Egyptian Rat Screw. And I remember when I went to camp, that whole singing thing...it always happened. Gah! haha.

But I really like this story so far, and I really like how you haven't made it move so fast.

whee! much fun! if my camp experience had been like this, i wouldnt avoid it like the plague. also, random thought: i agree w/you about guys shorts. call them capris. pisses my bro off to no end *smirksmirk*. but yesh. luffed the story! cant wait for more! funfun. thankee!

I love it! *giggles insanely* We! I hope you get the next chapter up soon! .

oh, lovely.

the dialogue is very much like that between my friends. raz and kier and will are great, and travis is hilarious. :"your mother was a dysfunctional toothpick":snicker: yes, i like him.

i'm glad you're pacing travis's emotions and realizations realistically. it makes reading much easier. you balance personalities and activities well. (not sure if i phrased any of that right...) meaning: i really like your writing style.

so. do post the next chapter soon! _

O.O

Uhm, duh, Travis.

*would glomp you if he knew you* OOh! I loves teh story! And I really love Kier. He's col...Really. - Please update soon...whee...I love caffeine...

Wow, finally updated, i had thought you had given up on this one...but then you spring back into action! very revealing chapter, i like revealingness-like-stuff...yea...anyway, another great chapter! _

-Mika

*blinks,bows to author person* Thank Kurama...I was begining to think that everybody abandoned FictionPress or something..Nobody updates their stories anymore ...O_o... I love your story! I love Kier..O_o...Heh...Alright..*heaps fabulous praises upon author person* _

*adds to fave authors*

To Travis: No shit! To Set Aiidoneus: Good chapter... I wish I went to a camp like that.

Holy crap, an update! Is it the Apocolypse? *checks out the window for demons and hellfire*

Anyway! Short, and a little bit disjointed, but after six weeks, I can forgive that. I'm happy you're getting back into it...update! Soon! Please?

*giggles* I read this story 'cuz it was on Slim's favorite list and I HEART it. You have to write more really soon, because I lovely it. It's very pretty. Please more for the poor, sick, mono ridden girl with nothing to do but read stories and sleep?