gah! good gods woman! six weeks! that's a cruel length of time between updates! i'm loving the angst tho, so the wait was worth it. The salt and pepper mating ritual put images in my head that're gonna be hard to get out . . .but ne way, very funny, very well written, UPDATE SOON!

/shades/

Yay more. He's out of denail. Wow, i say well done to him! Hehehe.

Update soon. I have no problems with whining about the lack of updates to someone...:D.

yay you updated! not enough though. so not enough!

Six weeks is a very long time.

Therefore I shall not only shoot you, but beat you with my special long wooden stick if you don't keep writing! *evil glare*

Good chapter, though. I was wondering when Trav would realize that. ;;

~Slim and her special long wooden stick~

Hey, a cute little shounen-ai fic. I like cute little shounen-ai fics! I am now your reader. Have a nice day.

Oh, he's just -now- finding this out? God, he's got a thicker skull than m-... nevermind. That's not possible. But he's still got a fuggin' thick skull!

If you ever take that long again, I've got dibs on pumpin' ya fulla lead. And dicing you. With a spoon. And eating your brain so that I can get your amazing writing powers and intelligence that passes mine. I'm leaving your heart. I don't want to be a coward.

I will definitely whack you if you don't get the next chapter up, as you requested. :)

One thing to point out: Will was the first to get out, forcing Will, Réz and I to run in circles around the table trying to hit the ball.

Try and get you a better review later :)

Poor Trav. He JUST realized this. Hmm...I liked this chap, it was cute. I hope you update soon!

So cute! Be sure to update soon. _-

This is SO cute! I want more! VERY VERY SOON! Pwease?

This is so cute! I love Kier's character. He's adorable. Update soon. Please?

O, yummy. Another great chapter. Sorry I didn't review when they first went up, but I've been off in get-stabbed-by-needles-so-your-immunizations-are-up-to-date-for-school-then-get-dragged-around-by-friends land.

Waffles are only good coated with butter and syrup with a glass of milk on the side, and of course bacon must be syrup coated as well. Have you been reading my mind? First the awesome dislike line, the anti-Avril, the Comfortably Numb, the food. This is making me very interested.

Yeah, it is kind of lacking compared to your previous chapters, but hey, we're all entitled to one chapter that we aren't happy with. (Of course, in my case, I'm entitled to hate everything I write with a passion.) Moving on to the next chapter.

Okay, had to open a review box right away to point out my favourite lines :)

1)"your mother was a dysfunctional toothpick"

2) "Then I severely dislike you to the point where I want to rip out your vital organs and use them as pincushions." (I love this one, it's fabulous. I want someone to tell me it's not nice to hate people just so I can say it.)

You've got the waiting in line syndrome right on target. Yes, chlorine is hell for we blond people. If they do it wrong, out comes the greenish tinge that makes people think we're bottle blonds. Good song. Hope this doesn't have a word limit. Yet again, another wonderful chapter. I (im)patiently await the next installment. Umm, the only part I wasn't fond of was the dialogue about the strawberry shampoo but that's probably left over training from english class. The whole someone's dialogue with someone elses action in the same line. Some people, I'm told, find that confusing as to who did the talking. *shrugs*