|Reviews for Flawless|
| serwaverider chapter 8 . 6/20/2016
Sorry, not really sure what it is I want to say at this point. I feel(?) invested in the plot but it seems to me most the set-up being laid out without advancement in action if that makes any sense. To be fair, mystery and suspense lead me out of my comfort zone. I also tend to plot line graphs, as when playing a video game, the enjoyment of the game curve vs. the challenge/skill curve and how close they are in relation to each other.
| EPuppy chapter 3 . 9/13/2013
Miiiiicaaahhh es soo cutee
| EPuppy chapter 2 . 9/13/2013
SkyxMicah aw :3
| EPuppy chapter 1 . 9/13/2013
Aww i love fics like this :3
| Lovergirl chapter 4 . 1/2/2013
I...don't...know..how...to feel aout ths...chapter
| honey splattered brains chapter 8 . 2/18/2009
ew. i dont like anyone except mikah. D: the story plotline is still cool though c:
| Lovedward48 chapter 42 . 8/19/2008
OMG that was brilliant! I love it! I can't say wich couple I love more. They're all just way too cute!
| efphrim chapter 1 . 3/24/2008
I already like this story.
| i-see-faeries chapter 42 . 7/25/2007
Well that was an interesting read. It took me a while, but I did it. LOL. I love it. I really do; I thnk you have a great plot. But I do have constructive criticism though.
For one, your characters seem shallowly developed outside their love lives. I realize that it's probably because that's what the story is about, but even so, chracters development is essential for a story to seem alive. Also, you try to create angst for Mikah, I believe, but that seemed kind of weak as well. I don't know. It just seems like a lot of overstating to me. His situation isn't that bad, not any worse than mine or anyone that lives in my town. And the ending seems kind of abrupt. I know ending a story at a sad part with a sort of cliffhanger is popular, but it's still hard to do correctly.
Note. I did not say this to be mean. I love your story, I really do. The humor amuses me and the romance makes me smile. And I know it's a little too late to critique, but I though I'd do it anyways. And after all, this story is old. I'm positive you're a whole of a lot better writer now. I do love this, and I'll be reading the sequal soon!
| rose.tinted.lies chapter 1 . 6/4/2007
I keep thinking I've reviewed this story (and I may have. If so, forget that last statement, and pretty much this whole thing, 'cause it's likely I've said it before . I have a really bad memory).
At first my favourite character was Mikah, but throughout the story it changed and became Kael. I can't help it - he's so damn cute!
I know I'm reviewing for the first chapter, but I've read the whole thing .
Your writing is amazing! I love the way you describe emotions, and that you don't skip over anything.
I'd write more, but I have a tonne of homework, and most of it's due tommorow xD
Anyway, this was a great story!
| Scribbles Go On Forever chapter 41 . 2/24/2007
WOW! amazing! i am about to go onto Reckless -
| Kyle's Precious Little Girl chapter 41 . 12/14/2006
It took me like...4 days to read the whole thing, but i finally did it! And i'm so impressed with this story! It was really good! And now i'm going to read reckless! yay
Kepp up the great work!
~Kyle's Precious Little Girl
| Kizuna chapter 41 . 8/5/2006
Oh my God! How could it end like this? Well, I must start read Reckless now,because this was to cruel!:'( But the story is the best!
| Kizuna chapter 40 . 8/5/2006
Ah! They are so sweet together! Even though Kael is really angsty! But I like that!
| Kizuna chapter 39 . 8/5/2006
Poor Kael!I feel so sorry for him! But he's still cute, though!