I really like this story. I'm glad you have the Annie/Jack romance in there but I think it should have been Clu/Fi instead of Carey/Fi... Clu and Fi belong together!Other than that, this story rocks and is going on my favorites list :).

i know you you r cool but your story was like omg it was a lot cooler then you and it was not all that goog:-) j/j it was ok for a story!

Yo! Diva this is Liz and I would like to say that your first part of the story is really really good and it sounds really really misterous!

Good start! Keep going! Post more soon! By the way, please try to sorta include Carey in the story. If you feel like it. It doesn't really matter. )

great start. I would love for you to keep on writing this. and post when you add another part in the So Weird clubhouse like you did the last time. Oh yeah add lots of Carey (well...if you want to that is)

keep it up,

slappy :)

It's so good but you must read mine on Nsync world it's called The Life I Live.

sis yo i love the story see i reviewed shut up

your story is cool

rememer:YOUR A NERD!

What's this doing in the Originals section?

I like this story

Good story! Are you that exited to having your story here? Geeze! take a chill pill. Great story even though I HATE ANNIE! But hey it's good. hhhhhmmmm We need to get together and finish our story hu? TTYS.