|Reviews for One Last Star|
| Amara Ryden chapter 1 . 4/24/2004
nice job. )
| anon63 chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
aww, thats really sweet... just a note, you misspelled goodbye in the fourth stanza thing. ok, it was nice!
| hurtmushroom chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
This is so sad! I loved the "The stars above us" and "The world around us", it kind of makes the whole thing complete (does this make sense?).
| Baby Milo chapter 1 . 6/11/2003
That was really good!
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
its very nice, nice poem! great job, its pretty...
| Grendel chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
Thank you for sharing this beutifull and sad poem. Its feelings expressed in a very strong way - the way you feel.
| Celestial Sailor chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Interesting use of imagery and expression through words. It is truly a universal passion of your experience which seems so hard to find nowadays. I appreciate the many comments you have given my work and congratulate you on a great effort and vigourousness reflected throughout your work. My e-mail address is checked daily, if you wish to speak.
| Jason Daniels chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
days like those are worth revisiting every now and then
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