|Reviews for Harsh side of Life|
| pointythings chapter 1 . 9/9/2005
I think this has some good ideas, but it would work better if you used more specific examples. It would be more detailed and descriptive, more poignant, and give a clearer mental image. Also, you have a couple of instances of accidental rhyming that you might want to work out.
Yours in writing,~pointythings~
| joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
the harsh side of life... *sigh* oh well it's... achievable! i really loved the last line &) it's... inspiring.
| crystal chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
I can imagine very well wat it feels like, _ nicely done. [r it all rhymes... . i suck at rhyming...]
| Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
~Heart of the Sword