Reviews for Innocence
thaiswirl chapter 1 . 7/30/2003
i really like this one...
joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
so factual :\ and sad. nice work.
lainxauber chapter 1 . 7/2/2003
So true...I'll never be able to trust the world like I did when I was little; thinking the people I love will always be right where I need them, that good is always beautiful and bad is always ugly, that everything is black and white and distinguishable by first glance. Now I know nothing is the way it seems, and it can make things a bit depressing at times. Life isn't a Disney movie, and I'll never be able to let go of that knowledge again. I guess that's why adolesence is such a hard time; we're learning a lot of things that we'd be happier not knowing.
CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
:S I don't get it... what have you lost? Nice haiku anyway! :)

Vnomi
Ellerfru chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
omg this is so true...
Meg Spalding chapter 1 . 6/24/2003
wow. i like the way you put it. very interesting.
crystal chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
Very nice, morbidly true.
Mime chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
I completely agree with you. Once you gain knowledge of how corrupted the world really is, your innocence in life is gone.
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Too true.. I know what you mean.

CoolBeans18s
elementlenore chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
it makes me sad, but you summed up innocence perfectly.
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
Very true... reminded me of Seta Soujirou from RK.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
That is quite true.

Heart of the Sword
PainKiller chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
True. So amazingly true. Just an great Haiku in so many aspects. The subject was a perfect idea.