i know the feeling...nice

:'( ahh, so much pain in the world...

wonderful portrayal.

This is great! I have written a haiku when my heart was broken! :) Well done on this... it describes heart break perfectly! :)

Vnomi

ouch,that hurts!i hate being heartbroken!

I know how it feels like...:' ( good job, swift sky silver! oh yeah, and read some of mine sometime, too, okay? I'd really appreciate it, since I don't get too many reviews.

i kno exacly where u r coming from. heart breaks have got to be the hardest thing to deal with. keep on writting

Yes, we've all felt like that before. Beautifully expressed!

Brilliantly described.

CoolBeans18s

*cringes* Yeah that would hurt...anyways, great work and keep it up!

*Immortal Spirit*

Ouch.

You described it perfectly.

Heart of the Sword

Just a great Haiku. You've used a great word with "Stab". It has a lot of meaning, and really stands out to me, at least. Awesome work.