Reviews for Heart Break
thaiswirl chapter 1 . 7/29/2003
i know the feeling...nice
joie 610 chapter 1 . 7/18/2003
:'( ahh, so much pain in the world...

wonderful portrayal.
CancerianQueen chapter 1 . 6/25/2003
This is great! I have written a haiku when my heart was broken! :) Well done on this... it describes heart break perfectly! :)

Vnomi
wildtenderness chapter 1 . 6/16/2003
ouch,that hurts!i hate being heartbroken!
Angelic Wings chapter 1 . 6/12/2003
I know how it feels like...:' ( good job, swift sky silver! oh yeah, and read some of mine sometime, too, okay? I'd really appreciate it, since I don't get too many reviews.
TeArS oF fRoZeN FiRe chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
i kno exacly where u r coming from. heart breaks have got to be the hardest thing to deal with. keep on writting
Mime chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Yes, we've all felt like that before. Beautifully expressed!
CoolBeans18s chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
Brilliantly described.

CoolBeans18s
The Broken Princess chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
*cringes* Yeah that would hurt...anyways, great work and keep it up!

*Immortal Spirit*
Psycho-kyugurl chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
Ouch.
Keep it 100 chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
You described it perfectly.

Heart of the Sword
PainKiller chapter 1 . 6/4/2003
Just a great Haiku. You've used a great word with "Stab". It has a lot of meaning, and really stands out to me, at least. Awesome work.