Reviews for Love At First Sight
Baby Milo chapter 10 . 6/10/2003
Wow! This is really good!
JazzeeT chapter 10 . 6/10/2003
wow. its about time this happened! Thanx for the update. So now that they are together you def cant keep us in suspense anymore so update soon
luckynumba7 2 lazy to sign in chapter 9 . 6/9/2003
i really liked that chapter! Hope you update soon! John is such a guy! Why doesn't he just tell her why he slept with that chick and that he thought she was sleeping with that one dude! Geez they need to get this worked out!

Update

thanks,

luckynumba7
luckynumba7 chapter 8 . 6/9/2003
Man he just isn't having the greatest day is he? He was totally being a guy! LOL always jumping to conclusions and then not even thinking about anything just doing whatever he wanted. tsk tsk tsk. Thanks for reviewing my story and i really like this one! I updated if you want to read it! Thanks

luckynumba7
GoogleCorelli chapter 8 . 6/9/2003
OOh i really like this! please updater soon-dont keep me waiting!
monadoll chapter 7 . 6/9/2003
that is the exact thing i don't like! i hate it when a girl turns out to be like that and the more i read on, john seems to be a sissy... sorry! but this is how i feel after this chapter. that's it. but i'll still keep on reading and hoping it would get better..
luckynumba7 chapter 7 . 6/8/2003
o suspense! I like! But not for long! If you don't update i may have to resort for violence! and we know you wouldn't like that! LOL i really like it please update soon. Thanks

luckynumba7
JazzeeT chapter 7 . 6/8/2003
are u purposely leading us on because i really hope that is all it is a lead on. Dandridge and Lara eeww, whats next the grandfather arranged a marriage between them. Anyway, cool update you def have me wanting for me. Update soon
beautifuletdown chapter 2 . 6/8/2003
i havent had a chance to read it all yet, but what i've read is really intriguing! cant wait to read more:)
faery tragedy chapter 6 . 6/8/2003
I liked the romance and humour in your recent chapter! The mention of Spice Girls really got me going. The end was so fluffy and good. You described the kiss really well. Nice job!

*Faery Tragedy
monadoll chapter 6 . 6/8/2003
go john! go lara! yayy! finally..

this is a very good chapter...especially the ending..;D

write .
Animeboy2002 chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
Very good i love it! it's very good. please, write more!
faery tragedy chapter 5 . 6/7/2003
I'm impressed by how smooth and entertaining this story is! Your characters are great, with lots of diversity. I'm not used to reading modern romance fics, but my first taste of one was more than decent! You carried your characters well, I think. My favourite line was:

Not the type of person to be picked up by some cheesy one liner.

Because it really showed Lara's personality in one sentence.

The only problem I can see is a few typos here and there. But other than that, this is definently a good read! Keep writing.

*Faery Tragedy
Freaky Deaky Dutch chapter 4 . 6/7/2003
Good job laralie, except i thought that they were dealing with a "jack the ripper type case" instead of a robbery? but anyway, KEEP WRITING!
monadoll chapter 4 . 6/7/2003
whoa! ease up now... i hope that there's nothing going on between lara and that dandridge guy..i don't like him. it's a really gool story.
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