this is very moving.

truly sad though.

i rather enjoyed the repeated use of "inhaling the peace..."

or w.e is was that sounded like that.

That was REALLY good thats all I have to say

Yes, very good. I can see why this piece is popular. However, at times it is condescending ... there's a feeling of moral righteousness ... like the author truly knows what is right or wrong

Beautiful

OMG, that was beautiful! Rather than pity her, I envy her for the peace she knows!

A brillent work of art!

T~H

Aw. *tear drop* That was so sweet and sad.

This was a lovely piece of work, I enjoyed it a lot. It reminded me of a poem in prose form. Excellent job.

-Katrina

This was beautifully written and well put together. It is a nice and peaceful read, as well as original. I'm off to check to see if you have any other works, I hope so. :)

Lady Shaiye

Oh wow. I'm sitting here crying, that was so beautiful.

Oh my god ... that has to be one of the best short pieces I've ever read.

*bows to you*

This is really beautiful; a poignant and heartbreaking story. I love the juxtaposition of the pain in the world and Emma's happiness. My favourite line? 'Inhaling the peace'.

This story was very touching and it really does make you think. I got so much into it that I nearly cried. :-)

Great story!

Cheers!

Hey...

I am currently in the process of bullding a webby, .com (for an idea of it, go to writersbasement) and am collecting favourite storys.

I was wondering if you would allow us to post this stry on our site?

If so, email me at the above email address and I will email you with the detials..

Thanks

Su

in a way, it was patronising to people likee mma. but in another way, it was beautiful, clear and sparkilng. it had an echo of truth resonating through it. it was very sweet, soft, lovely. warm, friendly, kind. it was beautiful, unusula, and i liked it.

Uniquely sensitive and... touching.

Nicely done.