|Reviews for And She Dies|
| Shadafakup chapter 1 . 7/19/2003
This is so Amazing.. Just like the previous piece I read.. Its entirely beautiful.. The images, emotions and descriptions used here is perfect.. It awesome, a very moving piece.. Perfect in its own way.. I loved how you described her 'death'.. It was so tragic and at the same time breathtaking.. The pictures you created in my mine were great.. I liked how you brought in nature to add to the delicacy of the poem.. The use of repetition and the flow here was very well done too.. I loved the piece.. Esp the lines :
"And she dies, crossing the delicate line
That lies between the living and the dead"
"Watching shadowed faces and shaking fingers
Choose black velvet shifts and pale jasmines
Seeing the fissures that line the hearts of those who
Truly loved her"
And so many more, I couldn't possibly paste all her.. Wonderful piece.. Its definitely goin on my favs when I can login.. Wow..
| Ahnhel chapter 1 . 7/5/2003
A very disturbing, dark, tragic, and beautiful piece.
| Magnificent Moi chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
W O W. That was amazing...really touching...and...and...yah well you can always guess what i'll say about your work.
| Jordans Rebel chapter 1 . 6/5/2003
OH WOW. AWESOME! this is AWESOME!