Wow, awesome beginning. Your descriptions are vivid and interesting. Absolutely amazing. Joanne's realization that she is somewhere else is very realistic. Great job with keeping you realism.

Give a little bit of background info on Joanne. Who's her family and why is she so depressed?

Awesome job and please update soon.

I always thought guan yin was female?

I always thought guan yin was female?

ooh, intriguing. i would go read the next chapter, except my dad is on the phone and i can't hear myself think. but i'll be back, don't worry!

I love your descriptions, they are comprehensive and very suited for a romance fic. Not so much that they are an overkill either- it makes the scene unfold so nicely before me. Update soon, ya?

Hey hey! This is a really good story. I love your descriptions, it makes the reader feel like they are there in the story as well. Keep udating and I'll keep checking...PS thanks for reviewing The Witch Of Sweetbrire, I hope you keep reading it.

I like the way the odd woman appeared in her life! That was really neat and well-handled. Um... constructive criticism... *thinks very hard* maybe you could tone down a little bit of the fancy description? It's mostly nice but a little lofty.

sorry about that, not signing in and all. I think this has a wonderful start, and i can't wait to read more. I like you're description of the city she was in and how cold it was. Your words were geniusly (I think that's a word..) put together.

Cool story so far. I really like your writing style, it's detailed and it flows. I hope you keep adding to it