Reviews for Light & Darkness
SilentRebellion chapter 1 . 1/11/2004
i like your style and this poem was short but contained more thoughts than most of the poems done by other ppl on this site.
Unfinished Author chapter 1 . 6/15/2003
Nice, short n sweet lol. Perhaps put a line after each comma so it reads down the page. I think i will have more of an effect then, as it gives the poem a better pace. Congrats on another great piece of work!