|Reviews for Different|
| Punky Monkey chapter 1 . 8/27/2003
Good poem just a couple of things i would say...
take the so from line 15
also change the so on line 17 to 'being'
and on line 18 change it to something more powerful...it just doesnt seem to have a strong ending.. cant think of anything currently maybe 'always makes me down' or 'always makes me not so good' the 'that' seems to take the emphasis from the last line somehow... i dunno. Sorry i'll quit blabbering now :) overall its a good poem though!
| BohemianAtHeart chapter 1 . 7/11/2003
ppl can be so evil! i kno its hard but u'll make it!
great again! keep it up!
| booseeker chapter 1 . 6/28/2003
Hey, I know exactly what that's like. The feeling that you're not even close to what they are.
One of the worst qualities of human nature is pushing away people who are different.
Bien fait, you captured all that perfectly in words.
| EmNight87 chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
Awesome! that's the only word to describe it.