|Reviews for Scattered Pieces|
| AutumnRhapsody chapter 1 . 8/22/2003
That's really nice, really sweet. I especially like the last line. Good job!
| Granite Claws chapter 1 . 6/19/2003
This is friendship, right?
| Liller chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
This is a good poem; I think I like this the best of all your works I've seen so far. A couple of things, though:
Punctuation isn't all that bad, once you get used to it. :)
I think that words in capital letters loosen the seriousness of the piece. Italics are usually what professional writers use for enunciation, (not that I can spell it), why don't you italicize instead?
Since you use the phrase "scattered pieces" in the middle of the poem as opposed to the end, I think you should just call it "Pieces".
It's really quite good; I like the support it shows for your friend. She's lucky to have you there for her.
| BleedTrueBeauty chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
i wish i could write like you.