Reviews for Universe Around Me
Escapist chapter 1 . 6/9/2003
Yeah, I feel like that all the time.

Nice job.
XxXidiosyncraticXxX chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
Cool. _ It's very... abstract. Would be so cool as a song.
Just Another Face chapter 1 . 6/8/2003
I love this poem, I like the

"Nothing can bring me back

I see you"

Its awsome, great job .

~Lyndz~
blinkie chapter 1 . 6/7/2003
very nice poem! it's kind of bittersweet. i guess the line 'you can thurt me now' gave me that idea. and a very mysterious last line too. _ it kind of disturbed me, to tell tha truth. keep it up!

blinkie
Liller chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
nice, but the end is kind of spacy. it's not really what the poem is about.
BleedTrueBeauty chapter 1 . 6/6/2003
This is an interesting poem.