Well, I was rather wondering about the Japanese grill aliens...:) Looking forward to the answers to my questions, so keep it up, man.

~He Who Walks On Al Fours

PS - And never forget that they're called graphic novels. Comic books are for kids.:)

Very good, I'd love to read more. You're use of language is very well done and it's pretty descriptive. Keep up the good work!

great job keep writing

This story is wonderful... I especially loved the description of Allen Thickmann, and the voice of your character is superb. Keep it coming!

~He Who Walks On All Fours

Excellent preface. It doesn't give away much but the narrator sounds like a mysterious person (for now). You have a really good grasp of language. I don't read science-fiction often but your work sound quite interesting. Do update regularly!

Ah, the document mangler. Don't we all know it well...:) Looks good so far, a bit brief to form an opinion, but you've got me interested in reading more... thanks for the review, btw.

~He Who Walks On All Fours