Reviews for Aliena & David
BritishBookworm chapter 4 . 1/23/2013
Did he seriously just call her a wench?! :')
Haha, loving it so far!
Guest chapter 21 . 12/4/2012
lovedddddddddd it
GreysonDrew chapter 21 . 4/21/2012
I know that I'm like, a DECADE late, but I love this story. It is amazing, and I think you are a fantastic writer. I would be happy to see Aliena and David once again, though. You have a talent for writing, and I thank you for sharing it :) Keep up the good work!
cheesecake15 chapter 21 . 12/13/2010
Well that was a very cute story, slightly cliche, but very cute.

. xx .
non.graceful chapter 21 . 10/9/2010
naw... i'm disapointed that you didn't carry out David's main personality... and add on with a couple scenarios with his friends... overall... it was GOOD!
Selzilla chapter 8 . 8/30/2010
Quick question, I thought Kyle was Aliena's boyfriend? :/
munz03 chapter 21 . 7/1/2010
Cute story... :)
SlugHunter chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
"Luckily it only took her 5 minutes to get to school from the subway." did you mean luckily it only took her 5 minutes to get to the trainstation from her house? and later she goes into the subway and catches a bus...

i think theres a few inconsistencies and unintentional misdirections, but it's still got potential

:)
DA-chen1 chapter 9 . 4/14/2010
hey firespiritess!

i like your story, it's kind of sweet and innocent :-)

DA-chen
Your Execution chapter 21 . 11/18/2009
Aaw I LOVE the last two lines the best :D This story was freakin wonderful I love it :D
JZK chapter 21 . 6/14/2009
cute
CallMehHayleeD chapter 21 . 6/11/2009
AWE_! That was wonderful , wonderful , wonderful!
CallMehHayleeD chapter 15 . 6/11/2009
YAY! So cute!
I Murder on Impulse chapter 21 . 1/8/2009
HAHAHA CUTE!

XX
DeirdreC chapter 21 . 1/4/2009
cute story,

i really enjoyed it
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