Reviews for Aliena & David |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Did he seriously just call her a wench?! :') Haha, loving it so far! |
![]() ![]() lovedddddddddd it |
![]() ![]() ![]() I know that I'm like, a DECADE late, but I love this story. It is amazing, and I think you are a fantastic writer. I would be happy to see Aliena and David once again, though. You have a talent for writing, and I thank you for sharing it :) Keep up the good work! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Well that was a very cute story, slightly cliche, but very cute. . xx . |
![]() ![]() ![]() naw... i'm disapointed that you didn't carry out David's main personality... and add on with a couple scenarios with his friends... overall... it was GOOD! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Quick question, I thought Kyle was Aliena's boyfriend? :/ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story... :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Luckily it only took her 5 minutes to get to school from the subway." did you mean luckily it only took her 5 minutes to get to the trainstation from her house? and later she goes into the subway and catches a bus... i think theres a few inconsistencies and unintentional misdirections, but it's still got potential :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() hey firespiritess! i like your story, it's kind of sweet and innocent :-) DA-chen |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaw I LOVE the last two lines the best :D This story was freakin wonderful I love it :D |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWE_! That was wonderful , wonderful , wonderful! |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAY! So cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() HAHAHA CUTE! XX |
![]() ![]() ![]() cute story, i really enjoyed it |