Reviews for Aliena & David |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really good story specially like the 2 weiwpoints and the name Aliena. |
![]() ![]() ![]() cool beans! ive said it before and ill say it again, crystal is seriously cool. can't wait 4 the next chapter! |
![]() ![]() good job the plot is really interesting |
![]() ![]() update son! |
![]() ![]() I'm starting to think Kevin is alittle bit of a jerk, or maybe just not that smart. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay, woo hoo, u updated! evil kevin and mary... |
![]() ![]() Hey i just found your story, but i like it! yes, i'll review your other chapters later! and hey, please come and check out my " living with trey duvall," i guarantee you will like it...please send a review my way, hope to hear from ya soon, lataz, Kris |
![]() ![]() ![]() Crystal has to be the coolest lil sis in the entire world! shes jsut so awesome! and Mary and Kevin are such great antagonists for the story. they're arguing is just great. i love this story. keep it going |
![]() ![]() ![]() Loved it... When is the rest?lol |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg. i just love how u put Crystal in she is like the comic relief, the voice of reason and the detective. i hope she is an excellent agent though cause i dont want mary and stupid kevin to be successful. update soon |
![]() ![]() ![]() dude, this is good. Keep it up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() 0o0o0o! Good job! I can't wait to read more! Yay Aliena! Alright. I guess I'll wait for your update. *waits* -Alyssa |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oi! Mary is such a slut. She's stupid too. They're not gonna get away with it are they? UPDATE ) |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh wow your fic is so amazing! |
![]() ![]() I'm totally in love with your story. Don't let them split up tho! it took 17 chapters to get them 2gether...i'm in agony already! |