Reviews for Aliena & David
Zane Lorvusien chapter 3 . 7/11/2003
Really good story specially like the 2 weiwpoints and the name Aliena.
Semy chapter 19 . 7/11/2003
cool beans! ive said it before and ill say it again, crystal is seriously cool. can't wait 4 the next chapter!
molli chapter 19 . 7/11/2003
good job the plot is really interesting
shell25 chapter 19 . 7/10/2003
update son!
Southern Spell chapter 19 . 7/9/2003
I'm starting to think Kevin is alittle bit of a jerk, or maybe just not that smart.
FamousOneLiners chapter 19 . 7/9/2003
yay, woo hoo, u updated!

evil kevin and mary...
Kristina Toffland chapter 1 . 7/9/2003
Hey i just found your story, but i like it! yes, i'll review your other chapters later! and hey, please come and check out my " living with trey duvall," i guarantee you will like it...please send a review my way, hope to hear from ya soon, lataz, Kris
Laurie-the-Duck chapter 19 . 7/9/2003
Crystal has to be the coolest lil sis in the entire world! shes jsut so awesome! and Mary and Kevin are such great antagonists for the story. they're arguing is just great. i love this story. keep it going
Write Me Thrilled chapter 19 . 7/9/2003
Loved it... When is the rest?lol
JazzeeT chapter 19 . 7/9/2003
omg. i just love how u put Crystal in she is like the comic relief, the voice of reason and the detective. i hope she is an excellent agent though cause i dont want mary and stupid kevin to be successful. update soon
Southern Spell chapter 18 . 7/9/2003
dude, this is good. Keep it up.
False Advertisement chapter 18 . 7/8/2003
0o0o0o! Good job! I can't wait to read more! Yay Aliena! Alright. I guess I'll wait for your update. *waits*

dreamer-to-the-core chapter 18 . 7/8/2003
Oi! Mary is such a slut. She's stupid too. They're not gonna get away with it are they? UPDATE )
LaserStrike chapter 18 . 7/8/2003
oh wow

your fic is so amazing!
Laurie-the-Duck 2 lazi 2 sign in chapter 18 . 7/7/2003
I'm totally in love with your story. Don't let them split up tho! it took 17 chapters to get them 2gether...i'm in agony already!
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