| Reviews for Aliena & David |
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  GothGodess chapter 1 . 7/7/2003 TALK ABOUT IT! it is suck a captivating story, then they have to STOP IT AT THE CLIMAX! thats the only think that sux about FictionPress... most of the authors give up at the GOOD STORIES! (im not saying u gave up just keep writing...) |
 Chamzel chapter 18 . 7/7/2003 GothGoddess - Yes. WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! WRITE MORE! O *teases Philicia* |
| GothGodess chapter 18 . 7/7/2003 WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE WRITE... need i say more? |
| Sheeba chapter 18 . 7/7/2003 Oh! The Plot thickens...lol. Update soon. This is getting good. |
| your man johnny blaze 15 chapter 18 . 7/7/2003 This chapter was really good. Mary is really annoying and Aliena really needs to slap her across the face. I did feel sorry for Kevin but if he's going to go along w/ that little plan then I could care less about what happens to him. You're doing a great job w/ this story. Much better than I anticipated when I first started reading. Later -johnny blaze 15 |
| BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 18 . 7/6/2003 GOOD JOB~ Mary is a bitch! Pardon my french...hehe. I look forward to the next chappie soon! |
| Shell25 chapter 18 . 7/6/2003 yay! i thought chapter 18 would end this story... i was so scared... but it doesn't! just want 2 tell u i REALLY like your story. update soon! for my sake at least! pz out ~shell25~ |
| vballchic chapter 18 . 7/6/2003 o they are goignt o break them up? i hope not. keep updating. |
| hgdgkhljklfesjhgfjghkhgk chapter 18 . 7/6/2003 cute chapter! i think i am your 100th reviewer! yay! or at least i hope i am. keep updating. i am glad they hooked up. |
| molli chapter 18 . 7/6/2003 great set up i love the way this story is going! |
| FamousOneLiners chapter 18 . 7/6/2003 ooh! a plan, i like, as per usual, update soon!i think she should stay with david! |
| Lady Meliah too lazy to sign in chapter 17 . 7/5/2003 LOVED IT! And your grammar and such is getting better. Good job. Can't wait till the next chapter! ~Lady M |
| False Advertisement chapter 17 . 7/5/2003 Yes I loved this chapter! The dialogue kinda reminds me of that scene in 'A Walk to Remember'. But I love it anyways! (Oh I like that movie, I wasn't trying to be offensive) Keep writing! -Alyssa |
| Michy chapter 17 . 7/5/2003 Your story was aMAZING! I LOVED IT. KEEP ON WRITING GIRL THAT STORY WAS YOU COULD HAVE ADDED AN EXTRA CHAPTER EXPLAINING WHYT DAVID WAS SO BAD |
| Semy chapter 17 . 7/5/2003 cool beans! cool chapter, crystal sure does seem a lot older than her age, keep the chapters coming! |