ooh, i like the jealousy and the drama, its getting somewhere, hehe, i hope you update soon and bring ally and david together..soon

Very Good! Poor David! The next chapter should be good as well, they always are...anyway this chapter was good and I hope you update really soon.

GOOD!

hey keep up the good work

I love your story! Update soon! XD

HEHEHE! I LOVED IT! They almost had a 'moment'. It was priceless. Very funny can't wait till the next chappie! continue soon~

It certainly makes up for the wait! lol hope to see more in the future!

finally! :-P cool! Crystal is such a cool kid, this is gna carry on for a while right?

MORE MORE MORE! Yay! that was really good! I think you should really write more. Only one criticism (one I have trouble with too) try to edit better, get a friend to hepl or something. Two Heads are better then one! BUt besides that, KEEP WRITING!

i just started reading this and i can't wait to read more. god...this story is great!

pz

update soon!

I absolutly Love your story. Crystal is so cute and perceptive. You are doing a great job of writing this. I really don't think that you need to improve anything, it's great the way it is.

That was so sweet. I'm so glad I was able to read this before I left. Very good. Keep up the good work.

As usual great chapter, I'm glad your back from your vacation, how was it? Did you and you sister have fun? Well I hope you had a great time. Later darlin'

Lyns

I like it! Update soon! :)

Oww oww oww! That was even more painful than I had thought!