Reviews for Aliena & David
FamousOneLiners chapter 16 . 7/2/2003
ooh, i like the jealousy and the drama, its getting somewhere, hehe, i hope you update soon and bring ally and david together..soon
BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 16 . 7/2/2003
Very Good! Poor David! The next chapter should be good as well, they always are...anyway this chapter was good and I hope you update really soon.
Sheeba chapter 16 . 7/2/2003
Tam-Tam chapter 15 . 7/1/2003
hey keep up the good work
Lorilei Sanchez chapter 15 . 7/1/2003
I love your story! Update soon! XD
BoyCrazyDarkMagician chapter 15 . 6/30/2003
HEHEHE! I LOVED IT! They almost had a 'moment'. It was priceless. Very funny can't wait till the next chappie! continue soon~
Laurie-the-Duck chapter 15 . 6/30/2003
It certainly makes up for the wait! lol hope to see more in the future!
Semy chapter 15 . 6/30/2003
finally! :-P cool! Crystal is such a cool kid, this is gna carry on for a while right?
Lady Meliah chapter 15 . 6/29/2003
MORE MORE MORE! Yay! that was really good! I think you should really write more. Only one criticism (one I have trouble with too) try to edit better, get a friend to hepl or something. Two Heads are better then one! BUt besides that, KEEP WRITING!
shell25 chapter 9 . 6/29/2003
i just started reading this and i can't wait to read more. god...this story is great!


update soon!
curlysara26 chapter 1 . 6/29/2003
I absolutly Love your story. Crystal is so cute and perceptive. You are doing a great job of writing this. I really don't think that you need to improve anything, it's great the way it is.
Hawk Mage chapter 15 . 6/29/2003
That was so sweet. I'm so glad I was able to read this before I left. Very good. Keep up the good work.
mdassley chapter 15 . 6/29/2003
As usual great chapter, I'm glad your back from your vacation, how was it? Did you and you sister have fun? Well I hope you had a great time. Later darlin'

Sheeba chapter 15 . 6/29/2003
I like it! Update soon! :)
Chamzel chapter 15 . 6/29/2003
Oww oww oww! That was even more painful than I had thought!
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